Night

Instead of my normal habit of gushing over your work, I'll do my best to critique this properly. So, firstly, the soft chiaroscuro lighting really gives this a peaceful, serene feel that suits the scene very well. Without a lot of action, the viewer learns a lot about these two just from their expressions, poses, and what we can see of them. The colors you chose work well, keeping the eye moving without distracting too much. Nice job with the complimentary colors. They accentuate the time of day and help to set the mood of the piece.

I'm fascinated by Neyen's loving look not being at all returned by Ramos. He seems to be worried about something that she either isn't registering or doesn't mind. I don't know where he's about to go, but I get the feeling that he's about to do something important. Even without explication in the artist's comments, this piece tells a snippet of story that draws the viewer in and makes them want to know what is going on while still enjoying the scene.

Your command of lighting is good, as I mentioned before, but it's especially noticeable in the details, like the clothing or on the bed. Overall, this is one of my favorite Svae scenes so far.