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I do really enjoy how these two meet l'D

Edit: Changed the dialogue, and the English bit since it really did make no sense. (I apologize, I've been running on fumes for the last 2 weeks.)
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applescruff Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If you want, I'm happy to help come up with some basic rules for the various languages of Svae. And then I'll go on and see if I can get bird-people and plant-people a language once I have that practice under my belt.
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Kiqo7 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
That would actually be really cool Q__Q I am a language derp so your help would be AWESOME.

And then I will make silly jokes and hopefully painful puns about bird and plant languages. :D
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applescruff Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm for reals excited. If you have any vague ideas for how anyone talks, as well as anything updated from that species/culture sheet you made, lemme know. I think I'll work on this tomorrow.
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Kiqo7 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Professional General Artist
Oh man, that will be my next project: update that big general reference sheet. O__O Next time I'm on msn I will totally share ideas with you! It shall be grand 8D
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92KICKSTART Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student General Artist
love the first person shot on the first panel =D
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Kiqo7 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank ya! :'D
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92KICKSTART Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student General Artist
ur welcome XD
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calmnivore Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
adding the word tongue makes it less confusing to a new reader, most likely, but IMO they'd just call it humanish/humanian/ or even just human
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Kiqo7 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
Hmmm will keep that in mind. Reed I speaks more old fashioned, hence "tongue" while someone like Jay would use that term l'D

Eeeh things to fiddle with.
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AngelicDragonPuppy Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AND THIS IS WHY YOU NEVER HELP GARECAS REED
Poor fellow X'D
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Kiqo7 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
YEAH NOW YOU'VE LEARNED YOUR LESSON REED

Reed: <l'D;
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VoidFire Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012   Writer
While I don't understand the last two panels, and I don't know where "english" came from in a world where England never existed, I have to say that I really really like what you did with this sequence. The broken "english" really sounds realistic (from the perspective of the kind of mistakes one might make when fumbling with an unfamiliar language) and the expressions are quite good!

...also, garecan sounds like german!
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Kiqo7 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
What is it about the last two panels that is confusing? (I've been meaning to come back and change the wording a bit, since I'm not fully happy with it) As for the English thing, it's weird because they are so obviously speaking English so how can I be "actually no, this is another language obviously lol". So not quite sure how to get around that O__o

Haha thank you! X'D I like to think my natural derp for languages is good for SOMETHING.

Garecan is my horribly mangled and mutilated version of German, since the Garecan language I see sounding very similar l'D

Thanks again Void! :la:
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VoidFire Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012   Writer
I don't remember what confused me, but you changed the dialogue now and it seems to make sense =P As for the 'english' thing, what you wrote is what I think fantasy people usually do, being all "Oh we're speaking common" or "Hey reader, the language I'm letting you understand is human language!" or things like that!
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Kiqo7 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
Aaaah good, I'm glad l'D I had a feeling it was that.

Welp, so long as people understand then we're good! <XD
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Dohmalore Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
Kiqo probably uses certain real life languages to parallel the ones spoken in her world...I've seen it done before. It's pretty understandable. It'd be hard to make up several languages.

I guess the english thing is a little weird. Unless maybe it's the language of a place starting with 'eng' in her world.
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Kiqo7 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
Yeah I did, and will continue doing so me thinks. Unless I was able to nab someone to help me build several new languages, I would be making a horrible HORRIBLE mess *__*;;;
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Dohmalore Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
It's not so hard to do one, but making several and having them all be distinct from one another would be difficult...
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Kiqo7 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
Yeah no kidding <XD;; Maybe someday I'll do it, but not now no way.
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Dohmalore Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
Well, good luck with whatever you decide to do. :shrug:
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VoidFire Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Writer
=P Yes, I had assumed that the similarities were not coincidental (though I don't know any Finnish and I know she's heard some of that, so I thought maybe I was wrong-ish about German).
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Devonition Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012   General Artist
dang those little marks all over the last panel, in the bg. D8 how long did that take you?!
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Kiqo7 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
Actually not that long at all! X'D It's just quick crosshatching, so it is actually quite simple to add haha!
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Devonition Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012   General Artist
that would make sense :iconmindblownplz:
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